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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-07-20 11:57 AM

This one is old from dark passions. I rearranged it and decided to plop it in my series of the moment.

THE PAIN OF THE LOSS

With eyes closed, ears blistered
I feel no pain, its not that it
isnt their anymore
i just cant feel it
I call out your name in the inky sky
but all I get is the silence,
a rumbling silence
you left me alone,
my one bestfriend, decided
life wasnt what u needed anymore,
but it was what u hated
The anger I want to scream
is stuck somewhere
between my heart and my head,
wishes dont help
dreams keep me up
walking up in a cold sweat
wondering what im still doing here,
maybe it was
your path to leave me all alone,
to let me suffer in silence
you promised me a thousand promises
but broke every one,
you arent my friend anymore
just bones
but forgive me friend,
i still love you
I cant quite hate you
because you are all I wanted
and all I had in a world filled with hate.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-07-20 10:35 PM

so sad...so very sad. The people we care about the most that decide to leave can't be hated. In a way they teach us to be stronger but still, you can't help but feel like this. You've opened up old wounds with this, regina. I thank you for sharing this with all of us. It is going into my library so that it can be remembered and treasured.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-21 12:20 PM

Wow, Regina... this is so sad. What a hard situation... something that's horrific to go through. I'm sorry. This poem was so full of emotion... I'm left in awe. I had to read this over and over, and each time it struck me a little harder than before... wow. Such powerful words.
Beautiful work, Regi. I am seriously at a loss for words..

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-25 03:03 AM

Pretty powerful poetry as usual Regi. Well done here, I just hope your still smiling in the sun

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-25 07:56 PM

VERY powerful writing...indeed sad...wow...i can relate...nice expression of such feelings...bye Ina

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-08-24 08:10 PM

Ina, your poems are very expressive.
It's simply amazing
I hope writing about your life does help you heal
Hope to talk to you again soon *hugs*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

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