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It's Funny: Growing Up
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It's Funny: Growing Up |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
It's funny that when looking back We laugh at long healed scars Shake our heads at immaturity When we wished upon the stars It funny that I can laugh At all those times I cried And look back with a genuine smile And a twinkle in my eyes Its funny what I'm thinking now That I'm grown up sitting here But whats funny is what I will think Looking back in 20 years [This message has been edited by LCBS (03-03-2002 05:26 PM).] |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This poem is great! You really sum up what it feels like to look back on the past . . . Good job! Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
It's nice to look back at past achievements and accomplishments, so I hope you look back in twenty years and enjoy this poem as much as I have enjoyed reading it now. Zu See this through and leave my friend, the tears will come and I will end. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I love looking back on memories when i cried and are now able to laugh and smile  Its such a great feeling..its a feeling of accomplishment like i was strong enough to get through it..i loved this poem!!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is sooooo weird...i found this while going through my personal library..and it doesnt seem to show me that i had posted here before  ...its great nonetheless...so in the library it stays  The feeling of Sleepiness when you're not in bed, and can't get there, is the meanest feeling in the world.-- Edgar Waston Howe |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really liked this one. Makes ya think... You really dont know what's going to happen in life. Anywho, thanks for posting this, I enjoyed it. - Cody - |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Its funny what I'm thinking now That I'm grown up sitting here But whats funny is what I will think Looking back in 20 years Interesting. I used to think a lot like that but I've reduced it down to one year instead of 20. 20 makes it sound like there is a plan to live that long. I did enjoy the read, Lisa. It's a universal piece and speaks to all. Always nice to see. ~AF~ I tried to stab my shadow the other day. It's a shame my leg got in the way. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done...enjoyed very much..first time i have read anything in the teen forum..i will have to stop back again real soon..keep up the good work..hugs ~Victoria
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem tks for sharing! robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Heh, a poem about learnin' how stupid n silly we can get sometimes... ahh... that's life ain't it? :P "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Interesting thoughts here. Lizzy!   Stop that.... Anyway, yeah, I don't completely agree with the message, but in a way, there is truth to faded memories not being so painful years later. Nice write. Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
wow, this was a marvelous poem. Very true and sentimental. Makes me relish my youth and the memories. nicely done |
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