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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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This is a song...it sounds right when i sing it but i dont know how the flow reads...and i cant read it straight cause every time i do i start singing it  so bare with it Discard discard discard discard your love for me Bury bury bury bury your love for me Remain remain remain remain outside of me Insane insane insane thats how its gonna’ be NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Believe believe believe that I’ll be back again Relieve relieve relieve the fear that I’m a friend You say you say you say the rules, they can cannot bend Today today today that all comes to an end NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I know I know I know the road your headed down You slow You slow You slow your fallin’ to the ground Below below below your head it starts to pound Hello hello hello your hear that same old sound NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW So go ‘head and try it but you know that I just wont buy it and you know You will just deny it watch it grow cannot keep it quiet in the end So go ‘head and try it but you know that I just wont buy it and you know You will just deny it watch it grow cannot keep it quiet in the end |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
you know what kev?...as soon as i looked at the title i thought of the song by linkin park...hehehe..but i tried singing it to the tune but it didnt come out right...  ..i liked this...especially the big "NOOOOOWWWWWW"...this is good i liked it a lot.. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thanks cher, haha nah i just tried singing it to lp too and it does not work but my style is very similar glad you like it... you should HEAR it maybe ill be famous one day |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice to see you post again, Kevin ...this was a very interesting poem for me...i enjoyed it...great job!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Well Kevin... I'm liking this... me thinks I want to hear it on MP3! When you're famous you better remember all of us here at PIP  Nice work, I enjoyed this.--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Kevin...I am definately thinking this would make a kick ass song. I thought it flowed well and was well-written. Thanks for sharing!! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
That song rocks! my fav of linkin park! and your work was amazing, would be a but kicking song! keep it up Kevin |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not my fav by you. I thought it had it's moments, mainly in the chorus, but it's not the best. Hope to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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