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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-07-18 05:58 PM

The sweetness in your mouth,
places a kiss on my lips.
The strengh of your hug
and your gentle fingertips.

^*~*^

The rhythm of your heartbeat,
so close to me it seems,
knowing that you're not present
yet seeing you in my dreams.

^*~*^

The way you place your head,
upon my grateful knee,
the way that you're just there,
lets me know that you love me.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-07-18 06:30 PM

This is a very nice poem. Very sweet. It's such an awesome feeling to know someone loves you. I am glad you were able to find it.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-18 06:43 PM

Damn all you people and your love poems...They are really depressing me. HeHe- Kidding.
I liked this alot Kim. It was very very sweet. Great write here.

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-18-2001).]

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-07-18 07:32 PM

lol I agree. I wish I had a love life... But I don't, and you expressed yours very welll. I liked this one, good job!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-07-18 09:13 PM

I really like this. it's wonderfully written..I think this is the 2nd thing I've read by you tonight, and I love both of them...yeah, you were the one with the confusing 2nd stanza, right? well, I think this one is wonderful

thanx for sharing...*hugs*

I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden.
*HUGS ZU*

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-07-19 01:36 AM

beautiful images of love...VERY sweet poem...i enjoyed the read, Kim

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

6 posted 2001-07-19 04:08 AM

Kim,
I thought this was great. It was beautifully written and wonderfully expressed. Thanks for sharing!!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

7 posted 2001-07-19 04:13 AM

This is such a sweet poem,
i really enjoyed reading it!

You should give this to them?

ALLIE

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-19 04:14 AM

I really liked this poem. Thought it was really awesome Kim!
Very well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-07-19 09:06 PM

Very well written, Kim! I enjoyed this.. my fave lines were:
"knowing that you're not present
yet seeing you in my dreams."
Beautiful thoughts. Keep posting all your work

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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