Crystal Raindrops (conclusion)

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FoxXena
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where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

0 posted 2001-06-26 08:20 PM

But these crystal raindrops,
those little crystal raindrops,
so precious and fine,
are a treasure when used well.

When cried with laughter,
when cried with joy,
when cried either in sun,
or when cried in rain,
these little crystal raindrops,
oh those little crystal raindrops,
are never the same.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

LoneWolf
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IL

1 posted 2001-06-26 08:24 PM

wow, iliked this. a great conclusion to a great poem. good work

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Fading Away

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2 posted 2001-06-26 09:43 PM

This is a really good conclusion to the Crystal Raindrop series! I really liked the ending to this. With every tear one cries, he/she will never be the same... very nice work! I enjoyed it!

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

obscurity of cloud
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3 posted 2001-06-26 10:16 PM

wonderful conclusion!! i love the whole poem. it has such a strong sense of all poetic greatness!!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2001-06-26 10:52 PM

like this

Dopey Dope

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5 posted 2001-06-27 01:18 AM

Nice conclusion. I really loved how you ended it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

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Canada

6 posted 2001-06-27 01:44 PM

I love this! You managed to keep the delicateness throughout!

TLMF,
Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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7 posted 2001-06-27 02:19 PM

i loved the ending

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

Heavens Tears

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8 posted 2001-06-27 06:03 PM

I really enjoyed this "series". You used beautiful words. Thanks Marie for getting Fox to expand on this. Without you, Fox would have deprived us of the rest of this wonderful poem.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-06-28 11:44 AM

Crystal raindrops it is
Enjoyed the read a lot
you did excellent on this piece
thanks for sharing

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

anonymousfemale
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Limbo

10 posted 2001-06-29 06:47 AM

Indeed they aren't ever the same. It's a good conclusion to the other piece.
Well done.

~AF~

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stace_co2003
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In a dream world

11 posted 2001-06-30 09:41 PM

this is a great conclusion!! I'm *thrilled* you shared!!

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
-->Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

anonymous albert ?

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12 posted 2001-07-01 02:53 AM

beautiful job...the ending made it mor so

...i liked it...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

13 posted 2001-07-01 12:33 PM

i really liked this one. it was cute.

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