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Teen Poetry #5

Remembering/Myself

little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-07-17 04:17 AM

Sitting
with myself
Thinking
about myself
Remembering
by myself
Lying
to myself

Fighting
with myself
Laughing
about myself
Remembering
by myself
Crying
to myself

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

WHEN YOU LIVE, YOU DIE
WHEN YOU DIE, YOUR FORGOTTEN
AND WHEN YOUR FORGOTTEN

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-17 09:49 AM

oh yes, have done this too...I like this one a lot! I think many will relate to this one!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-07-17 02:12 PM

short and to the point...i can relate...this just shows the "alone" so well...you expressed it well,Matt

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-07-17 06:38 PM

Nicely done, Matt!! I liked this one. This is probably one of the best I've read from you. I really enjoyed the format. Well done, indeed.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-07-17 08:05 PM

Man have I ever been there. HaHa...I liked this... Interesting format.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-17 08:07 PM

I really liked this one! Probably one of my favs from you. I can relate to this perfectly!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-07-19 03:15 AM

I liked this one a lot. Sometimes it's good to have a shoulder to cry on. Then again, sometimes it's also good to be able be by yourself. Good write, I liked it.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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