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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-07-16 05:46 PM


Little birdie told me something today
He told me that you’d been cheating
Not with just one girl, but with four
You always said you loved me
And that you’d never hut me
I thought I could trust you
Guess I must’ve thought wrong
You went back to her after everything
She hurt you, and left you
But you still love her after everything
You told me you were over her
She didn’t matter to you anymore
But I guess that was all a lie
To get what you wanted from me
You didn’t care that you hurt me
You got what you wanted and left . . .



"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 07-16-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-16 05:54 PM


Awww ... I'm sorry!

If he cheated on you, then you deserve so much better.

Only a player should date a player!
Sounds like to me that he's a player!

Hope everything turns out for the better

Alexia

If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you?

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2 posted 2001-07-16 08:46 PM


*hugs* I am soo sorry.  That completely sucks... that guy's a jerk.  He's not worth the waste of energy.  You never deserved someone like that.  I hope you know that!  This was a well written poem... a good let out of your feelings.  Stay strong...

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

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3 posted 2001-07-16 08:59 PM


sorry to hear,Tamma...the poem itself was nice...i hope everything gets better for you, though.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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4 posted 2001-07-17 03:16 AM


Tamma,
Man I am so sorry this has happened to you.  I recently got out of a situation like the one you were describing and I know that it sucks.  But you should know you deserve SO MUCH BETTER.  Good luck with everything and may happiness and love find its way to you soon.
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

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5 posted 2001-07-17 12:34 PM


Tamma, you deserve better if he cheated on you.  Cheatings horrible. I've never cheated on anyone and I've had people cheat on me.  It's horrible when one person's devoted and another's not.  I've done the jealousy bit on accident before, but not on purpose. never on purpose. Anyways, you wanna talk or anything, just drop me an email.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

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6 posted 2001-07-17 03:45 PM


That guy is a JERK.  He doesnt deserve you obviously.
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7 posted 2001-07-18 01:54 AM


Yep, sounds like a horrible situation. Tamma, you need time to heal and be alone for a while. Good luck with that  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

allie
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8 posted 2001-07-18 04:42 AM


So damn sorry to read this!

Mainly because i've been there and done that.

AWFUL AWFUL situation...

you expressed emotions strongly in this poem... good work


i hope you're ok...

ALLIE

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