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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-09-16 07:10 PM


The on going life thing has taken a turn for the worst.........he found out. And now I think he might no. That is so good and bad in someways.


around the silent water
of a relationship to fall
now crashing before my eyes
where my love used to be

i am scared once again
where i didn't wanna be
once i moved away
it followed me like it should

but i can't think how it was
when this last came to happen
my life is crumbling under my feet
where your sweet eyes once were

where has the times gone
when friends were there and more
all gone with the instant flash
i can't think straight again

around in circle again i run
crashing into everything
your name echos in my mind
and now you might know


~*Theres a sparkle in your eye that only i see, and theres a place in your heart where only i wanna be*~

[This message has been edited by Riley (09-16-2002 07:11 PM).]

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lilmissbabyteddybear
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since 2003-03-16
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1 posted 2003-03-17 12:11 PM


I like this poem. you spoke very well. it reminds me in some way of me.. IT was great..~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~

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