Teen Poetry #5 |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
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You I know you lied. I know you looked me straight in the eye- and turned around and smirked. I know you did it. Why'd you pretend..? I hate to believe after all this time you'd burn me. You... I know you made me trust. Trusting you has led me to one conclusion; Don't. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (09-10-2002 09:43 AM).] |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
This is a very good write, you said alot in a few words here, I think most of us can relate to what you are saying as well, anya |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
![]() Can I hurt him, please? You know I want to... There is so much pain evident in this, Jenn. Whoever did this should be shot and put out to hang in public. A lot of tension as well. I recommend copious amounts of alcohol and a good bagging session. ![]() Look after yourself, ok? Love ya, deary. ![]() ~AF~ "No wonder I do not make people comfortable. I am a mirror. I have far too many things to say." - Mouthing the Words |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
This piece was very good, reminds me of a fight my roommate and I had. People shouldn't lie, it hurts more than when you finally tell the truth if you ever do. Keep up the great work. chel With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah- thanks everyone for your replies. ![]() This was actually about a really close friend of mine..she tends to have a big mouth when she really shouldn't. *sigh* Hard to trust anyone anymore. Thanks again. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
This poem was great.. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. he use to lie to me with such an ez.its crazy..I really like it. im sorry your friend lied to you like that.hope you learn to trust. ![]() |
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