Teen Poetry #5 |
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Undying Love |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Feelings getting stronger Can't contain any longer I need to explain The thoughts in my brain Entrenched with fear Of what i might hear Sustain my feelings, for i am dreaming Lost in lust, can't adjust, in love there's no justice Don't wanna face this, i hate this With nothing to lose, it's you i choose Wanna know your views, will u refuse To much to handle, like a candle Warming I melt, to much my hearts felt As the was melts, i realize With each passing drop i scrutinize I understand what i must do Be open with you, always be true Confess my undying love for you |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme was wonderful. Awesome. *~Meredith~* "I can taste you on my lips |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
OMG>. this is a great poem.. i liked how it rymed.. i could say it.. and understand it. all to well i might add. lol.. i like it .. ~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~ |
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