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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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Ok here is the deal. I like this guy, as you know, and a friend says I should take it to the next level and go out with him. I just don't know! eyes meet across a crowded room as have a thousand times before yet i saw something never seen an electrical spark in your eye smiles so contagious as eyes sparkle you smile so widely at me i am scared to smile back but do any other time something is there i can tell you smile everytime we look i know you have something deep down to tell me a thousand times yet i know i shall always have that smile buried for you because you break the bindings that hold my real self in everytime i see your face amongst a crowded sea i can pick in out anywhere every feature has been memorized i want you to know that i feel the same as the spark we find every day but i can never tell you how i feel so scared am i to tell you anything in my heart i scream at you tell me over and over the only words that come are simple and sweet i love you only a dream but i can see that spark in your eyes everytime is reality ~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~ [This message has been edited by Riley (09-06-2002 10:30 PM).] |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
If I only had a penny for each time I'd felt that way... us guys go through the same thing. It's never easy to ask someone out, but if you like them enough,you will find the strength. Well anyway, this is yet another great poem from you! It's been so long since I've been on... it's nice to see new faces with such wonderful writing ability! See ya 'round! -Rich After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Rich: I hope that is the way my guy is feeling cause man it is so easy to talk to him and he is sweet and nice and has the best smile. Gosh rattling on about my personal life. Bad Ri! Lol. Well thanx a lot. I wrote this cause a friend said he totallys likes me and he hangs around me compliments me, you get the picture. I am beginning to think she is right. And I wrote this because of him. Well thanks for reading. Ri ~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~ |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
Hello.. I have read alot of your work..it is very good.. I also really like this one.. Good Work.. Jenny >>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<< |
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