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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
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0 posted 2002-09-11 12:28 PM


Myself i depict
Thoughts i contradict
Far from peace
Poetry my release
From negative to positive
Weed was the causitive
Gone for good, as it should
Constantly misunderstood
Not by those who love me
That's what i see, want a garauntee
A year it will take to make
Shake, erase and replace
Get ready to embrace, a new face
Filled with joy, no longer a boy
For i sit and contrive
My life to be revived


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Kevin
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1 posted 2002-09-11 01:28 AM


This poem reminds me of my friend hoss
He writes just like this
and it sounds alot like what he would be saying right now

anyways thanks for making me think of him

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