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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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look past my false image and my ever present laugh even deeper past my eyes that tell unspoken secrets to the little girl within whos not ready to grow up not ready to be responsible couldn't have a commitment but this little girl stays buried deep in my heart and you are the only one to ever bring her out sure my friends have seen her but only a little bit and my best friend knows her well not as good as you seem to everytime i want to say i like you she says yet it never passes these lips that are so tightly clenched this little girl likes you to scared to know you do to can't accept the fact that she is only a little girl no more no less just that ~*Theres a sparkle in your eye that only i see, and theres a place in your heart where only i wanna be*~ [This message has been edited by Riley (09-09-2002 08:46 PM).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
good stuff ri lets just get it out of the way *grammar/spelling* aside from that  this has many layers, it reads well the first time and I thought that it was a bit contradictory at first, the little girl being scared of a relationship but at the same time being the head over heels in love one...but then I realized thats exactly what its like, and appreciated the poem alot more thanks |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Kevin: Thank you so much. My grammer and spelling has always been on the down side. . And yea, love is exactly like that. Scared yet loving the peron so badly. Kinda funny huh?Ri ~*Theres a sparkle in your eye that only i see, and theres a place in your heart where only i wanna be*~ |
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