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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wishing... you were here. Holding... you so dear. Wanting... to be with you. Hoping... we can make it through. Missing... what we had. Going... from happy to sad. Dreaming... you are with me. Thinking... we could never be. Looking... for you everywhere. Noticing... you're never there.... ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I loved this. I understand it, you know? This reminds me of something I might write, so perhaps I'm biased...oh well, I still like it.  Great job Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ahhh...the hardships of lonliness...I know these. You've expresed yourself very well in this piece...As for a title, I'm not one to reccommend. That's the author's deal.  If you ever need anything, and I mean -anything,- please contact me.. carl2lee@hotmail.com~Carly - Teen Mod "My own eyes are not enough for me; I will see through a thousand and yet remain myself..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hmm, that might be a bit emphatic, Carly. It's open to a wide variety of interpretations.... I'll butt out now. Oh, and for a title? How about Mirror song? If that's too lyrical, something doomy like Cracked mirror? Eh. Mike |
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