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Teen Poetry #5

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Captain_Simian
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since 2002-07-15

Posts 5

0 posted 2002-09-02 08:49 AM

I wrote this a while ago but the thoughts behind it still linger so i thought i'd put it up.

The feeling everyone knows,
When you wish you mouth could close.
The sense of immense regret,
And you know you're into debt.

The fastest way to learn
Is to watch the good things burn
But when these things are best
It's tough to pass the test.

The strain that's on your mind
So cruel and far from kind.
"Sorry"'s all that remains
But 'sorry' doesnt take away the pains.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2002-09-02 01:29 PM

I liked this very much

~*Azi*~

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-09-02 03:05 PM

yeah this gad a god flow to it, liked this

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

3 posted 2002-09-02 08:44 PM

You did a great job on this and I really liked it.

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