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Luther
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since 2002-08-15
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0 posted 2002-08-28 04:52 AM


when everything seems bad.....
and the light is almost gone....
just grab what you can.....
magnify it one thousand times......
and think......
it could be worse....

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
1 posted 2002-08-28 10:24 AM


So true, so very true.  

Welcome to Passions, dear.

ich bin schwul, ich bin jüdisch und ein Kommunist dazu, Ich bin schwarz und behindert, doch genauso Mensch wie du ~Wizo

Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29
Posts 326
Wandering
2 posted 2002-08-28 08:05 PM


Welcome to Passions! I like the message in this poem.

"Just grab what you can"... I especially like that line, I suppose because it has a sense of hopeful desperation. I hope to see more of your work!

~Sky


"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

[This message has been edited by Savage Quiescence (08-28-2002 08:05 PM).]

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