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StellarChica
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floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-27 07:56 PM



Ugh, I hate titles..Wow. It's been awhile since I've posted on here. And it's been awhile since I've actually written anything. But, here's something I wrote just now it's not all that great but it's just some pent up feelings I've been having as of late.


I think you're falling for me,
And it's terrifying,
It's everything I've ever desired,
But, now, I don't want it at all,
When I was younger,
I imagined love as hugs, kisses, and happiness,
Now I see it as pain and suffering,
So, don't tell me what you wish you could do,
Don't say you want so bad to be with me,
Because I want it all more than you know,
And that hurts enough for the both of us.


*~erin~*

"I've got nothing left to hide except for what's inside. I keep it all locked up in this prison we call love."-Sugarcult

© Copyright 2002 Erin Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
Child of the Stars
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1 posted 2002-08-27 08:53 PM


Ahhh...I can relate. Very very closely in fact. What to do, what to do...nicely expressed poem...

  ~Carly

"My own eyes are not enough for me; I will see through a thousand and yet remain myself..."
  ~C.S. Lewis

[This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (08-27-2002 08:54 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-09-12 03:28 PM


ain't it hard?
one thing you want something, and when you could have it you don't want it no more.
well, decide and stick with it
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
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3 posted 2002-09-12 11:00 PM


I've definately been there. So stop getting inspiration from my diary!! (j/k) Good job.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

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