Teen Poetry #5 |
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Mykels_Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-25
Posts 38australia |
When I first saw you, I was afraid to meet you. When I first met you, I was afraid to kiss you. When I first kissed you, I was afraid to love you. When I first loved you, I was afraid to loose you. When I first lost you, I was afraid to love agian. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very nicely written there...Sarah ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
nice poem, i really enjoy poems about love. Also agree with above post, great repetition. ALLIE |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
So true...It's scary to love again after heartbreak... I really liked this! You wrote down your thoughts very well. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree that it's very hard to trust anyone again after such a heart break. I know the feeling! I enjoyed the poem. I didn't really like the repitition of "you" at the end of each line, but the idea was a good one ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning... |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really really liked this one. Wow, this was a REALLY awesome poem. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really liked this one. I like poems about love. I guess I like what I don't have... That I wish I could have that... Oh well, life goes on. This poem was really good, I enjoyed reading it. Good Job! - Cody - |
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