Teen Poetry #5 |
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Touch your fingers |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain ![]() |
late at night when stars shine above i smile as i think about the one on my mind my fingers touch to my wistful lips and put upon it a poem for you may this kiss be delivered on the wings of a dove white as snow yet pure as life recieve it with open arms know it was from me when you feel a kiss on your anxious face smile and return it i will be waiting wether you will or not is up to you i am scared you will but terrified you won't my emotions swirl as breath touchs fingers off into the night the kiss flys away may the wind carry it safely to you once again <3 No guy is worth your tears, and when you find one that is, he won't make you cry <3 |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is such a nice wish, that a kiss would be brought on the wind to a person. I think it's very sweet. But then I say that about all I've read from you! Keep it up Riley! ![]() ~Beth Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
A lovely poem, here. You did a good job,it is an easy read and flows pretty well. I especially like the last two stanzas. Keep it up! ~sky "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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Buttafly_Kiss New Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 3Tx, USA |
WOW WOW WOW!! I LOVED IT! I hope you don't mind if I ask if I can share this with the guy I'm talking to he and I are about to take the next step and I think it is a wonderful poem please let me know if it is alright for me to share it with him! **Hugs** |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
It is fine with me! Glad you liked it! ~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~ |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
painted wonderful pictures...thx for the read A life without loveā¦is no life at all. |
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