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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-08-26 05:06 PM



Seeing you with her,
makes me feel alone.
We just weren't meant to be,
I should have known.

Now my dreams consume me,
in a everlasting nightmare.
I'm slowly getting frightened,
I want to hide, but where?

The realm of darkness,
it seems, I'm trapped in.
Fighting against these odds,
it seems I'll never win.

Trapped here in my cell,
I feel alone.
This sad, dark feeling,
inside me, has grown....

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2002-08-26 09:38 PM


hmm.. Yes.. Jealousy can do this to a person. One second you are secure with somebody, and the next second, that security is taken away. You know, you dont have to be lonely if you dont want to.

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

Luther
Junior Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 17

2 posted 2002-08-28 05:24 AM


Mate, a good read. Just make the most of what youv'e got...it could be worse.
anya
Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
3 posted 2002-08-28 06:55 AM


you will feel better eventually, but this poem expresses those feelings well,
Anya

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