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Teen Poetry #5

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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-08-24 03:04 PM

This might be a little confusing but try seeing it from my angle, and it's about a guy, and it just hurts, so this comes out!

slight brush against my cheek
washed upon a sandy beach
looking past a cast reflection
seeing the different soul within

watch as my face transforms
before the eyes that i fell for
past my outer core is a tender soul
that knew all along it was ment to be

cantering before my awful past
sliding now and again by the name
just to know the single fate
of the feeling i knew was there

touching your hand chills my mind
everything is gone problems no more
cashing in all chips i have scored
to be in your arms for just a minute

lasting impressions leave to quick
dancing upon the everylasting moon
quietly i find solitude within
depths of poetry all percieved

seeing your smile for a brief morn
is more than i can ask for right now
one touch of your hand on my face
will be more than enough for the minute

but soon much more will surpass
and more i shall want each day comes soon
i am yet another scared pawn in a game
but this game i soon shall beat

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

[This message has been edited by Riley (08-24-2002 03:50 PM).]

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-08-24 11:31 PM

I just wanted to say good luck!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-08-25 09:35 AM

Thanks, I hope you liked the poem. I put a lot into it and its my best one yet of my um....what would you call it, problem.
Ri

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

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