Teen Poetry #5 |
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Aspirations |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT ![]() |
Hey guys, Long time no post!! I can't even remember the last time I've been here, but I'm glad to be back!! ![]() Aspirations Within the burnished mirror, I assemble the reflection of my own cerulean eyes. My cobalt irises are perfectly rounded and centered, Staring back at me with a lacking intensity. I search deeper inside myself, Until I begin to perceive what I’ve tried so hard to conceal. There is no disguising my true feelings. I can effortlessly see through my fascia and towards the truth. My solitude hangs over me like a veil, So heavy to bear and thorny to eradicate. And all I necessitate is a true love to remove the heavy cloak of loneliness, Although I find that locating such a love is rather implausible. Hence waiting is the only option, Accompanied with impatience, and a twinge and yearning for love, happiness, perfection... And the conclusion to my preliminary observation, Is that these sapphire eyes hold naught but emptiness, as well as a deep aspiration for so much more. *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I really like this one. The last line just really got to me ![]() |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Bravo! "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
Heeyyyy, I didn't know you still wrote in here and I was thinking the name looked a little familiar. Well, anyways, I really liked this and I think maybe I actually understood it.... Hmm. Well, to tell you the truth, I've always kinda been jealous of your ability to write such... meaningful poetry. I hope you'll keep posting! Alwayz, ~*~Brittney~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I have nothing to say...............but all I can do is *standing ovation* là où est mon amour? |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
yes, yes, this was so beautiful. you do have a way with words, even if some are thesaursish (but thats just me). anyways! this was a great write, with beautiful imagery and wording. i especially loved these lines: quote: quote: keep writin! tiff “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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