Teen Poetry #5 |
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A Better Song to Sing |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Before you dried them, I felt the tears I was crying were eroding my very being away, you came to me, and made the night quiet, and sleep rest. Your softly whispered words of kindness and encouragement spoke volumes to me, You made me believe I was more than just a girl to be used, and taught me I could be so much more than what others had convinced me I was. You coloured in my existence, made things bright again, and washed away the shades of gray that had surrounded me, You saw that I was fading and pulled me back from the brink, and nutured me until I came back into focus, Now we are not together in the same way that we were, But I will never forget and always be gratful, That you taught me...a better song to sing [This message has been edited by anya (08-23-2002 11:18 AM).] |
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Tiger Junior Member
since 2002-08-18
Posts 24Queensland, Australia |
Very nice poetry... I like it. It has a soft elegant flow to it. Keep up the good work! ![]() -Tiger |
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Otaku Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 39Western Australia |
yeah i like this one..! gives both sides of the argument....how love can be great and painful... well done.. "Demon slain, the deed is done...." |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Ahh its so nice to see ones "new" writting style.. ![]() |
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