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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-08-21 08:55 PM

This is a vent, so its not gonna be all the awesome, but I am so stressed right now, that I just have to do this.

my world spins around
falling all over
i don't know where
i am or want go

you are there smiling
he is over there laughing
yet i stand here scared

i don't know what
i can do now
my head hurts
they were all to nice

yet, then again he wasn't great
and you weren't talkin yesterday
but i still have dreams
about the icy blue eyes

so scared everything
is rushing around me
they are both there
smiling at me

i cannot choose
so i choose to run
everyone is mad
but i will not hurt

i finally collapse
only a heep on the floor
wet pain flows from my eyes
crying for what

only a guy just another guy
a pawn in my oddish game of life
little do i know
problems shall resolve

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

[This message has been edited by Riley (08-21-2002 10:06 PM).]

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2002-08-21 10:24 PM

i know alot of people may say this but i can really relate 2 wut ur saying in this poem. it was a good vent, i hope it helped u.

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-08-22 07:40 AM

Well, poetry can never really heal anything but it has helped a little. I have a big problem right now and I am trying to get through it with my poetry. ( as you might be able to tell with some of my most recent ). Thanz!

Ri

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2002-08-22 02:02 PM

If you need to vent about something, poetry is really a great way to do it. I hope that you got something out of writing this, because I got something out of reading it. I wish you lots of good luck and happiness!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

4 posted 2002-08-22 06:41 PM

I hope your luck comes true! I need it!

Ri

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

5 posted 2002-08-22 08:50 PM

For a simple vent, this is pretty good! If you want to take the time, you could put a bit of work into it and turn it into something quite grand! But if you want to leave it as the helpful vent that it is, that is great too! Just get to feeling better, this too shall pass.

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2002-08-22 08:57 PM

I don't know if it will pass because I feel so strong about it. I just can't figure anything out. I am so confused!

ri

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

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