Teen Poetry #5 |
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Afraid |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL ![]() |
I know its hard i feel it to missing you so much yet beng so far apart every night i pray to god that you come back to me Im just so afraid that you'll go to another instead of me just because he's closer i just want you to be happy but this is tearing me up inside and im so afraid my prayers arn't enough I'm so afraid to lose you my love It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
wow this is the right poem for the exact thing that im dealing with right now... i dont know how to deal either... but i like this poem alot, it really sums up the feelings in few words, which is something i really admire in a poem. good job, and good luck, and thanks alot for the read *We are the hero in our own story* |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I liked the simplicity of this poem, your emotions came through well anya |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
thank you both for your replies It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I liked this poem alot. I've never been in a long distance relationship, but I'm sure it's very difficult, as you portrayed well in your poem. Good luck to you!! ![]() Always, Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
I really liked this, and I really wish I could let this guy read some of these because that is exactly what I feel. Ri To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world |
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