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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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swinging slowly on the porch swaying softly to and fro i lay upon your lap sweet kisses run down my neck never before this has been done upon my tiny home rushing by all to fast fully grown i shall be soon your lips swiverl and travel up and down my neck and kiss their way to my cheek finding my baby soft lips burning hot upon their touch sensation running through me kissing you laying there so innocent i should be yet there i am and there you were traveling across my body i smile and know that i shared my first kiss with you To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing this with us. Make sure you keep on posting stuff like this. Andrew Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i agree with andrew, good job on this.  ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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Smiles and Cries Junior Member
since 2002-08-23
Posts 16Newrk De |
Nothin like a first kiss its the most beautiful thing in the world somethin yuoll never forget good job Have u ever Loved somebody so much it makes u cry? Have u ever needed something so bad u cant sleep at night? Have u ever tried to find the words but |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
This is...lovley, thankyou anya |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
Hey This is the first time i have read something of yours and i loved it .. i would love to read more so keep up the good work .. it was great.. i remember my frist kiss hehe ... well thanks for the read ..and keep writing i wanna read more  *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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