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Chameleon
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0 posted 2002-08-18 07:11 AM


Scratch
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Misgiving in and out,
Well thanks so much.
Leaving and misgiving,
I am as so gracious as such.

In so far,
Deep in for,
In so far,
Deep in for…a scratch

Leaving and misgiving,
Well thanks so much,
Leaving and misgiving,
Deep in for…a scratch.

In so far,
Deep in for…a scratch.
In so far…a scratch


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Savage Quiescence
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Wandering
1 posted 2002-08-18 07:32 PM


Well, If this is about what I think, although I have been known to misunderstand, I am not sure how long it will be permitted to stay in forum. But regardless, I think it is a well-spoken poem, no matter what they say. Teehee

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

paper doll
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Floating on Uncertainty
2 posted 2002-08-18 09:31 PM


*jumps up and down* I LOVE THIS!

So going into the library. I could feel every single bit of emotion in this despite it's shortness.

You've done a fantastic job. Thanks for sharing.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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Riding
3 posted 2002-08-19 12:59 PM


I'm not sure I understand this , but I like the format
vixengrl04
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4 posted 2002-08-19 01:43 PM


The repetition in this piece really gave it strength.  What a very strong, powerful poem.  Great job!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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