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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Scratch ------- Misgiving in and out, Well thanks so much. Leaving and misgiving, I am as so gracious as such. In so far, Deep in for, In so far, Deep in for…a scratch Leaving and misgiving, Well thanks so much, Leaving and misgiving, Deep in for…a scratch. In so far, Deep in for…a scratch. In so far…a scratch |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Well, If this is about what I think, although I have been known to misunderstand, I am not sure how long it will be permitted to stay in forum. But regardless, I think it is a well-spoken poem, no matter what they say. Teehee ~Sky "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
*jumps up and down* I LOVE THIS! So going into the library. I could feel every single bit of emotion in this despite it's shortness. You've done a fantastic job. Thanks for sharing.  ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I'm not sure I understand this  , but I like the format  |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
The repetition in this piece really gave it strength. What a very strong, powerful poem. Great job! Always, Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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