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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2002-08-14 07:16 PM



I don’t know what I was expecting
When I came to visit you

But I sure wasn’t expecting you
To end up breaking my heart

It just came so sudden
I didn’t know what to do

I just seemed like those 8 months
Just plain disappeared in a flash

I’ve been thru this before –
But its never quite hurt this bad

I loved you more than life itself
You meant so much more than you know

I fell for you quite deeply in those 8 months
And I know I will always love you

It would be easier if I could erase my memories away
But that’s just not possible, I have to live without you

I hope one day, we can be friends again
But for now, I’ll just sit here and cry …

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

© Copyright 2002 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2002-08-15 12:15 PM


Welcome back, haven't seen you in a while.
Relationships are really difficult sometimes. It's just not fair the way things tend to turn out. Have no fear, there will be happiness in your future I'm sure of it.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

paper doll
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2 posted 2002-08-16 09:02 AM


You've got your pain out well in this, Tamma. Sorry to hear you're having a rough time.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

Otaku
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3 posted 2002-08-16 09:25 AM


I hope you get through this...and i know you will. When my ex broke up with me i couldn't take it..i felt like i just wanted to die and give up....i know it hurts....i know what you're going through...

Just don't let go....and remember that Life is so much more than this.....

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