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0 posted 2002-08-14 02:47 PM


i want you

           Yes, i am here

to be there

           i am

for me.

           i always am,i am near your heart

you're not

           i try

you can't

           i want to

not now

           but i try sometimes i can't

i've grown to much

           theres still time and memories

without you

            but i try so hard to be with you

and now you say

            i say i want to be with you

i don't think of you

             i always think of you

as my mother

             yes as your mother, you as my daughter

did you think of me

              always

as your child

              as my near child

but don't worry

              i constantly worry about you, you are
              my child

i am fine

               are you sure? you are always near my
               heart, i haven't gone a day without
               thinking about you.

without a mother
              
               i will always be your mother

just without you.

ok if yall can figure it out it's 2 people talking but only one person wrote it that's me lol anyways hope ya like it.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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1 posted 2002-08-14 04:46 PM


I figured it out, Robin. It seems kinda sad. I hope that you and your mom are doing well. God Bless.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2002-08-15 01:26 AM


me and my mom are fine tks.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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