You always put a smile on my face

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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-07-15 03:26 PM

You always cheer me up when I’m blue
Always make me feel so good.
You always pull me up when I’m down
Make me stand on solid ground.
Speaks from the heart dries my eyes
Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind.

You’ve got a way with words
Though they come out so wrong, sometimes,
You always put a smile, on my face.
Always make me laugh
When I’m feeling sad.

When you’re by my side I can’t go wrong
No matter what’s said and done.
When I’ll reach the top it’s cause of you.
And you make love seem so true.
Because your eyes always smile so bright
Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind.

You’ve got a way with words
Though they come out so wrong, sometimes,
You always put a smile, on my face.
Always make me laugh
When I’m feeling sad.

Whenever I’m scared
You make me feel save and warm.
Whenever it hurts
You’re my shelter from the storm.
Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind.

You’ve got a way with words
Though they come out so wrong, sometimes,
You always put a smile, on my face.
Always make me laugh
When I’m feeling sad.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-16 03:30 PM

This is such a sweet read! I'm guessing this is a song, and the refrain is the stanza you ended with? I really enjoyed this. I couldn't quite a put a tune to it, but I would love to hear it on a midi or MP3 sometime! Well done here.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

destiny502
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since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

2 posted 2001-07-16 03:34 PM

I have a 'friend' like this..he can always make me get this (edit)eatin grin on my face and put this joy in my heart when im at my lowest point. nobody but him can do that for me. sad thing is he can also cause me to feel the complete opposite of happy..without even realizing it. i really like this

Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion

[This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 07-17-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-17 07:42 PM

I thought the message was a very sweet and positive one. VERY well done. I know all about this as I know the complete opposite of it. This poem made me think and replay my whole love life for a while..thanks.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-07-22 03:08 AM

People like this always make like worth living. I'm happy that you found someone like this. Reading this piece made me see some of the truer people in my life.
Thanks for sharing this and bringing up some memories.

~AF~

Tearless grief bleeds inwardly.
~ Christian Nevell Bovee ~

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-07-22 05:14 AM

This is a really sweet poem and I have a "firned" that puts a smile on my face.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-23 09:16 PM

I liked this.
Screw the lovers... It could be about friends, family...anyone. I liked the diversity about it. my fav line- "When you’re by my side I can’t go wrong" I have a few people like that. I liked this bunches.

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

7 posted 2001-07-25 03:30 AM

I liked this one alot. It was very sweet. I have a someone in my life that does this for me too. The line that hit me hardest was
"Because your eyes always smile so bright
Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind."

Thats all it will take to make my day...just to see his smiling eyes.
Thanks so much for sharing!!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

allie
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since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia