Teen Poetry #5 |
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You always put a smile on my face |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
You always cheer me up when I’m blue Always make me feel so good. You always pull me up when I’m down Make me stand on solid ground. Speaks from the heart dries my eyes Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind. You’ve got a way with words Though they come out so wrong, sometimes, You always put a smile, on my face. Always make me laugh When I’m feeling sad. When you’re by my side I can’t go wrong No matter what’s said and done. When I’ll reach the top it’s cause of you. And you make love seem so true. Because your eyes always smile so bright Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind. You’ve got a way with words Though they come out so wrong, sometimes, You always put a smile, on my face. Always make me laugh When I’m feeling sad. Whenever I’m scared You make me feel save and warm. Whenever it hurts You’re my shelter from the storm. Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind. You’ve got a way with words Though they come out so wrong, sometimes, You always put a smile, on my face. Always make me laugh When I’m feeling sad. |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is such a sweet read! I'm guessing this is a song, and the refrain is the stanza you ended with? I really enjoyed this. I couldn't quite a put a tune to it, but I would love to hear it on a midi or MP3 sometime! Well done here. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
I have a 'friend' like this..he can always make me get this (edit)eatin grin on my face and put this joy in my heart when im at my lowest point. nobody but him can do that for me. sad thing is he can also cause me to feel the complete opposite of happy..without even realizing it. i really like this ![]() Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the message was a very sweet and positive one. VERY well done. I know all about this as I know the complete opposite of it. This poem made me think and replay my whole love life for a while..thanks. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
People like this always make like worth living. I'm happy that you found someone like this. Reading this piece made me see some of the truer people in my life. Thanks for sharing this and bringing up some memories. ~AF~ Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This is a really sweet poem and I have a "firned" that puts a smile on my face.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I liked this. Screw the lovers... It could be about friends, family...anyone. I liked the diversity about it. my fav line- "When you’re by my side I can’t go wrong" I have a few people like that. I liked this bunches. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I liked this one alot. It was very sweet. I have a someone in my life that does this for me too. The line that hit me hardest was "Because your eyes always smile so bright Lift me up when I’ve fallen behind." Thats all it will take to make my day...just to see his smiling eyes. Thanks so much for sharing!! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
this was so sweet... You really gave this person a wrap! they obviously deserved it too... Really nice read! ALLIE |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work, I really enjoyed the read it's a very nice tribute ![]() Zu |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
this is great [edit]...every word semed to pierce me.../Drew/ [This message has been edited by Linc (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great. to whoever this was for. i hope they enjoy it. Regina |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I really enjoyed this ![]() What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is really sweet..i enjoyed this one a lot it certainly put a smile on MY face hahahah...thanks for sharing ![]() ![]() ![]() "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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