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Pumpkin Pie |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hey wait right there for a minute – I thought you were the riddle, Mr. Spring riding his Cajun fiddle, I thought you were my pumpkin pie Seattle man couldn’t have predicted That I’d remember his voodoo And he still tastes good, you know, His black salty skin still sends me into Warp speed I’m not that easy, but I’m still alive Below the waist and even if the bishop Comes to rip it all from me I’ll say, “Hey, you know envy is a sin too” He told me so, yeah, He told me so Shh! I said I thought you were my pumpkin Pie boy, my Seattle man, dancing the Can-can but you seem to not know Of the ending and for once I find myself with apathy stains I’m filled up, fat and stuffed I know now you can’t find my mouth You can’t find the saxophone to play Your whispers on so now I can just Close my eyes And you’re gone I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I just loved the imagery although I am absoloutly perplexed as to what it could all mean, this is such a wonderful read, thank you for sharing this great peice of poetry with us  Andrew "If you are afraid of wolves, stay out of the woods" |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i'm still in aw. i luved this poem D.E. it was awesum. thanks 4 the read~Later~  ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 I'll come back to this memina.Damn.  Sincerely, SaVerite |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
I am definitely coming back to this one. It's in the library and will be replied to properly shortly. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow. I really rather liked this one, pumpkin pie is a favorite treat of mine and this poem is also. I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
hehehe, bet you didnt see this one coming, Hi you!, i liked it alot... it just had flavor.. or something.. i think its because of how you blended the seatle with the new orleans... i dont know... i just liked it.. reminds me of a Tori Amos song... sorry if that offends, but i think shes a good artist so coming from me it is a compliment Love ya Jams, The ever random posting Ember... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This IS a surprise. Random is right! lol Nice to see you here. But I'd rather see you posting than replying to my crap.  Promise to stick around a bit? I'm glad you liked it. Actually I met the Seattle man in New Orleans, but I'm glad you picked up on the different "flavors". I'm not sure anybody else did. Not that it matters.. but you know.. shrug. shrug. Love, Jaime I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem i really liked it hope to see more from you. tks for the read. robin you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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