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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Something's changed in you, I've been noticing it, Since you moved away. Does this distance mean you have to act distant? This difference in time zones, Sometimes makes it hard, To get you on the phone. Do hundreds of miles mean hundreds of missed opportunities? Just thought I'd let you know, While you're on the west coast, The east coast seems lonely. Somewhat of a vent, I suppose, but not quite. Anyway...enough from me. Thanks for reading. *~erin~* "You say the present's just a pleasant interruption to the past."-Something Corporate [This message has been edited by StellarChica (08-11-2002 09:40 PM).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhh yes I understand this. Sometimes if the other person is so caught up in moving and changing they forget their old lives and friends...I'd say just give him some time. Write him a letter maybe? Nice vent.  Feels good I bet. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
This isnt a vent its poetry I love the way you took distance and changed it to emotion Good stuff here SC |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
'does the distance mean we have to act distant', I love that line and I liked the whole poem and whether it was a vent or not I still thought it was a clever poem and I enjoyed reading it |
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