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That Special Somone |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
The starlight reflects in your sparkling eyes An agels voice are flowing from your lips You are a rose in the pouring sunlight While you dance you sway your perfect hips I wish I could fall asleep in your arms Everytime you pass me by I get speechless Can never explain these strong emotions But I love you and this I must confess Yesterday I asked you out on a date Just the two of us on a picnic, Under the clear blue sky in the country A candlelight dinner so romantic. We were love smitten the entire time And we were just about to make sweet love, When you disappeared infront of my eyes And then I just suddenly woke up... Your my dream woman, my castles queen, I know your the one God picked for me. That Special Someone... |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
Awwww....I was so excited thinking something great was gonna happen, but that's so sad! That poem was definetly amazing... I hope this dream girl you write about is really out there and you find her soon...  Love: ~*~Brittney~*~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Maybe I'm just in a mushy mood right now, but I just thought this was beautiful. Normally I hate love poems or "soft" things like that. Not that I think I'm some hardcore chick, but it's just not in my taste, you know? I did like this though. It sounded very sincere along with the lovely word choices. I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday. |
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