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lil_diabla
New Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 6
Alabama, United States

0 posted 2002-08-07 12:28 PM

I left that night,
Dressed for comfort,
I bidded my parents bye,
I was off to see friends.

Going over the overpass,
In my '93 Saturn,
I was changing my radio station,
When I looked up,
I saw bright lights of a truck,
Coming head on.

Next I felt utter pain,
And the coldness of metal,
I was chilled in wetness,
Through the racking of my mind,
I was crushed in metal.

Screams rang the air,
The driver in the other truck,
Awhile later I heard sirens,
The crys had died off.

I looked to see men,
Tearing at the metal,
Of my car,
To get me out.

When I was freed,
A firefighter lifted me,
In his arms and laid me on,
The road.

Chilled in wetness,
I discovered my blood,
The man's voice became distant,
As his eyes filled with tears and he said,
"Find out who this kid is, she is gone, call her parents".

Why did I die?
I have much to live for yet,
Please tell my parents and friends,
I love them,
Since I did not take the chance.

[This message has been edited by lil_diabla (08-07-2002 12:29 AM).]

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2002-08-07 12:41 PM

i really liked this. good job.

~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2002-08-07 09:25 AM

Welcome to Passions...
a good lesson, this,
always make sure
you let your loved ones know
they are...

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-08-07 09:36 AM

Hello Jenny. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

4 posted 2002-08-07 11:51 AM

a very interesting read, made me think, anyway i will look forward to reading more of your stuff
anya

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-08-07 12:05 PM

Interesting and makes us all think.
I read something similar to this once in another publication, only the driver was drunk. Sad really...

Welcome to passions.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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