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In despair and Incoherent
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In despair and Incoherent |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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In despair and incoherent Bitter words strike heavily upon a gentle heart violently stabbing at all that’s left of happiness bleeding slightly he clutches his chest and screaming defiantly lifts, himself of the floor searing pain rips through his veins and burning tears in his eyes, leave him blind little white lies echo in the air and drown out the beauty no bird song is heard in silence he weeps no words on his tongue. Andrew "If you are afraid of wolves, stay out of the woods" |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wombles? We have a sub. teacher at school named Mr.Wombles. That's all I know about that. I missed something, eh? Anywho, it was very mellow, visually striking, desparate, and true. Sometimes.. there is plenty to be said, but no way in which to say it. I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
All I can say is wow. This is one of the most poweful pieces I've read from you. Good job  |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i've always liked ur poetry, but this, i luved this. awesum job.  ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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