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Not My Frog
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Not My Frog |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
She knows what’s good for her, for once, And for now it’s time to decide – will she Tie it all up in ponytails and cyanide? For now she’s coasting on a lake in The foggy morning air and she thinks its Thick enough to swallow her in, within She keeps hiding and hiding, Hiding in a kitten stare and feeding On those messy mixed Mays Getting ready for the party in her old Too-too dress, it all happened before She moved into the trailer park – it seemed To be real, but what is not real is how She thinks she feels (...this will change everything) Just something I've been going through. It's a bit more personal than my recent work so you might not get anything out of it for yourself, which I understand. Any questions - just let me know. she is me |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
This makes makes no sense and yet makes perfect sense. I like that about it. Good write. ~Sky |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Perfectly wonderful write, memina.  I wanted to stop in and say that. I'll be back later to go in-depth as to what I gained from it.  Sincerely, SaVerite |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It felt like my heart was being punched -- which, I think, is what yr goin' for in this. Hope things level out for ya soon. Mike "I fall into your arms." |
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