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Teen Poetry #5

I thought i knew

IKNAP
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 47
Torrington, Connecticut

0 posted 2002-08-06 01:23 AM

bare w/ me on this one...

I thought I knew you inside and out. I thought I knew your every thought. I thought I knew every move you made. I thought I knew every word you spoke. I thought I knew what was best. I thought I knew how to control you. I thought I knew how to run your life. I thought I knew what i was doing. I thought I knew, I think I was wrong.

"The Fat Man Walks Alone"

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

1 posted 2002-08-06 05:41 AM

liked this, not too sure about the format of it but still i can really relate to what you are saying
anya

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 2002-08-06 09:20 AM

TORRINGTON!!!!!
wow thats 3 people now....scarey were taking over this place

good thoughts, I like the way you put I thought I knew what was best in the middle of that, I actually liked the format for some reason I think that thoughts like that should be streamed together, just fix that lowercase i, it's bothering me

p.s. hi bbriggy

I snooped your email

[This message has been edited by Kevin (08-06-2002 09:22 AM).]

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-08-06 11:35 AM

Oh no Betsy, your cover has been blown!

The format made it unique from everything else that is posted here...I liked it!

call me

~Lisa

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