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StellarChica
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floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-05 10:48 PM



My fingers on the keys,
I'm typing it all out,
There it's done,
All my feelings for you,
Right on the screen,
In my pretty blue font,
The cursor sits,
At the end of the sentence,
Blinking torturously at me,
Beggin me to do it,
It whispers to me,
"Press it. Go ahead."
My finger hovers,
Above the enter key,
For what seems like hours,
I close my eyes,
Bring my finger closer,
At the last minute,
I pull it away,
And delete the whole thing.

Thanks for reading.

*~erin~*

"Temporaryism has been the Black Plague and the Jesus of our age."-incubus

© Copyright 2002 Erin Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
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1 posted 2002-08-05 10:56 PM


I could totally see this scene in my head, excellent write!


~lisa

Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31
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2 posted 2002-08-06 01:26 AM


This is such a cool poem! Great writing . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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3 posted 2002-08-06 01:40 AM


I'm with Lisa (what an original reply, eh?). *smiles* I could almost feel your hesitation. Good job!
anya
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4 posted 2002-08-06 05:36 AM


done that myself a few times! this was good thankyou
anya

Kevin
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5 posted 2002-08-06 09:24 AM


Ahh the poetry of the instant message generation I think we've all done this before...but man what a feeling when you hit enter...

oh, and in person is always worth the risk

by sc

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