Teen Poetry #5 |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
My fingers on the keys, I'm typing it all out, There it's done, All my feelings for you, Right on the screen, In my pretty blue font, The cursor sits, At the end of the sentence, Blinking torturously at me, Beggin me to do it, It whispers to me, "Press it. Go ahead." My finger hovers, Above the enter key, For what seems like hours, I close my eyes, Bring my finger closer, At the last minute, I pull it away, And delete the whole thing. Thanks for reading. *~erin~* "Temporaryism has been the Black Plague and the Jesus of our age."-incubus |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I could totally see this scene in my head, excellent write! ~lisa |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is such a cool poem! Great writing . . . Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I'm with Lisa (what an original reply, eh?). *smiles* I could almost feel your hesitation. Good job! |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
done that myself a few times! this was good thankyou anya |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Ahh the poetry of the instant message generation I think we've all done this before...but man what a feeling when you hit enter... oh, and in person is always worth the risk by sc |
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