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You Were There |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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Dedicated to a friend you were always there i was independent thought i could do anything left by myself i turned around you were there i left you by yourself didn't answer your calls went out when we were talking he left me i turned around you were there i was doing great with you by my side talking late into the nite i heard crying i turned around you were there you needed me now my turn to help but I know everytime i turned around you were always there Better check that I'm about to upset and I'm glad now so you better step back I'm taking over so watch me shine-Joanna Pacitti/Watch Me Shine |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like this one; it's honest and emotional. Good job  |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
This was a great poem. Good work! *~erin~* "Temporaryism has been the Black Plague and the Jesus of our age."-incubus |
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