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Teen Poetry #5

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Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-08-04 09:04 PM

The sun on your back,
the wind in your hair,
driving through the country
without a care.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-08-04 11:44 PM

Awwwww.....keep going with this.....take us on that drive....short but sweet...

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 2002-08-05 02:48 PM

I disagree with Lauren... you've taken us far enough, imagination will take us from here. I liked the poem, it was elegant in its simplicity. Thanks

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2002-08-05 05:51 PM

I agree with Master, that was really good and I think that less can sometimes definetly be more
anya

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