Teen Poetry #5 |
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Us Against The World |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Safe, safe is what you make me feel Each and every night Home, home's when I'm tucked in your arms Cuz' then everything's right Could spend lifetime's in your gentle embrace Could spend hours just caressing your face Cuz' when the shoe doesn't fit And I just can't wear it You tell me, yes you tell me. Whenever the dark side starts leaning And life suddenly lose all meaning It's not you against the world No, it's us against the world. Your, your love's the reason I breathe Think life's wonderful Changed, changed me from awful 'to Something beautiful Could sit for years and smell your sweet perfume Could make hot romance spread throughout your room Cuz' when the shoe doesn't fit And I just can't wear it You tell me, yes you tell me. When rain pound like needles 'gainst your shoulder And it seems like the game is over It's not you against the world No, it's us against the world. I can never repay you For all that you've done for me How would I ever repay you For everything you've done for me Tell me... |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Only thing that confused me was...what exactly does he tell you? (I'm probably just missing it) But i enjoyed this immensely (<---this is me trying to use big words i'm not sure i can spell) It sounds like it would work very well as song lyrics. Thanks for the great read K The day you were born, you were born free |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
ps - i honestly didnt mean to choose that big yellow head sticking its tongue out at you as an icon! lol The day you were born, you were born free |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
good work...i enjoyed this piece a lot. keep it up. <3 Chel With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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