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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Rag doll sickness will pull Down heavy on your pigtails Until your head feels Sour in your hands That was me too, trust, That was once me too Never was born for Sailor envy Never was born to be A cup of tea Spark inside, you know it’s Hijacked this plane and it Looks like we’re going All the way That’s me Almost brave, Almost a better man Almost gypsy Almost potty trained All the way 7.29.02 "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i liked this. the first 2 lines were kewl, good job.  ~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Have you ever read your poetry aloud? Just thinking that it would be really neat...Anyways this was really in-your-face, as is your style, and I appreciate it lots. Each time I re-read this I get something new out of it...ahh, let it flow.. Thanks for posting... ~Carly "Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions." |
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