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lil_pwheeler
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 39
here

0 posted 2001-07-15 12:40 PM

We've been Happy
We've been sad
But I bet
You at least had a dad

I myself
Had no such luxury
Its not easy
I agree

My mom
Never loved another
I guess thats why
I have no brother

Sometimes
If I think real hard
I can picture me little
Craddled in his arms

When I reunite up there
The very day I die
He'll pick me up and hug me
Way up in the sky

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-15 12:44 PM

Awww- this was bitter sweet.
Sad that you lived without a dad...but Happy that one day he'll hold you in his arms...
Great poem here!

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 2001-07-15 12:47 PM

This was lovely. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. I enjoyed it, would like to see more of your work

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

lil_pwheeler
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 39
here

3 posted 2001-07-15 12:51 PM

This isnt about me. My best friend had his die real early in his life in a car accident. He talks to me a lot about it and id try to write what its like for him

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-07-15 12:51 PM

It was sad yet beautiful...i really liked the feelings you put into this...nice job.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-07-15 01:15 AM

Nice job. Very well written.

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2001-07-15 01:16 AM

nice job kiddo, great to see you here!!

Cant wait to read more:0

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-07-15 01:53 AM

lovely write...very heartfelt...and i wish the best for your friend...a nice tribute to his father

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-15-2001).]

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-16 02:43 AM

Very heartwrenching read. Stay strong, and keep your head up

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-07-17 08:11 PM

Awesome job, but it's so sad....I really hope the ending does happen though

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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