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Teen Poetry #5

Self Pity

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-07-28 01:25 PM

Emotions lying on the floor,
as the raw lust touches your skin.
No thoughts of what you're doing,
or of how you'll feel in the morning.
No thoughts of what would happen,
if she walked in right now.
You're just doing your thing,
music playing in the background.
Betrayal from your lips,
will touch hers tommorrow.
But that doesn't bother you,
as human reactions are exchanged.
I pity the fool,
who fell in love with you.
Then i realize,
self-pity isn't healthy.

~In the end..it doesn't even matter...~LP

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

1 posted 2002-07-29 02:53 AM

more power to low-self esteem!!!! hehe just kidding!!!!=) love the poem by the way.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-07-29 03:08 AM

really like this, has a good flow to it.
anya

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2002-07-29 03:22 AM

I really liked this! Great flow and had a good message. Enteresting ending, but I liked it. Thanks for sharing!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

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