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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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It's been a while since i've been here so i figured i'd post this one i used to my now g/f if she wanted to go out with me. "I Wished" I see you standing there more beautiful then before i don't quite understand How it is that you are with my now My only explanation is that once upone a time I wished upon a lonely star high above the sky and deep within my heart I wished And I prayed Long into the lonely night Feeling no reason to rise With the morning light But now all my Wishes and prayers have finally come to call For with you to hold my hand I would have it all So now With all my heart I must ask you Will you be My girlfriend? It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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*~p.r.i.n.c.e.s.s.~* Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 38 |
awww, what a lucky girl she must be! that poem was soooo sweet! i cant imagine what would have been wrong with her if she said no! lol. but anyways, yeah that was really good. im glad theres someone out there for you and i hope youre very happy.  luv alwayz:~*~britt~*~ |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
There's a good rhyme to this one. Deep sentiments as well. Kind of the whole, admiration from afar, fascination with a mystery sort of thing. I hope you guys are having a good relationship now. A sweet poem. Parasite |
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