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CountryGirl4U New Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 6Sexiest Cowgirl |
When you talk about a bad day and how I make it all the better I'm listening When you look down at me and kiss me I'm watching When you pull me into your arms to hold me I'm shaking When you whispered the words I Love You I'm smiling *Summer* I wrote this poem a couple years ago when I first got into writting poetry. So it's not one of my best. I'll post more of them later. But this was one of my favorite because Of what it means to me and who it was about. Obstables are those frightful things you see when you take your eyes off your goals. |
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fairy girl Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 10*~*Virginia*~* |
I liked your poem, it makes me think of my relationship. thanks for the read.  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
umm...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...again..  this was a VERY sweet first post...as your emotions w/imagery were quite beautiful ...hope to see you read, share and reply more.[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
 Welcome to PIP! Nice read. I understand what ya mean about the whole sentimental value thing- I have tons of things like that. Keep posting. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow! Look, a CountryGirl4 ME! lol  WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Great to have ya here. I liked the poem, thought it was a great first post. Hope to see you replying to a lot of poems and postin a lot more! Again, Welcome! - Cody - |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
  WELCOME TO PASSIONS SUMMER!!!! this is such a sweet poem summer...i loved the read very much...makes me want to read more from you...more!!! btw i LOVE your name!!! summer ann winter  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! This was a cute first post! I cant wait to read more of your poetry Welcome again! |
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CountryGirl4U New Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 6Sexiest Cowgirl |
Thank you all for the comments, It makes me appreciate my work much more. *Summer* Obstables are those frightful things you see when you take your eyes off your goals. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Summer!! Welcome again!! This was a great first post, as said!! Hope you enjoy it here!! Keep it up!! ~Jeff~ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to Passions! A short and simple piece but it delivered the meaning well. Hopefully with all your posts we will see many replies too. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
First and foremost,  WELCOME TO PASSIONS! This is very nicely written poem. I think even though it was written years ago, you could go back and expand on it a little. Nice work, though I really enjoyed this read, and I look forward to seeing more from you. Keep sharing your work --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 07-16-2001).] |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Summer, I really enjoyed your poem, I'm new myself, so instead of saying welcome ... i guess I'll share your first post jitters. ALLIE |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to Passions! Wonderful job on your first post. We all look forward to seeing more of your poetry. (Please check your email for a special greeting) HeavensTears~Moderator/Passions in Poetry |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
Great poem Summer! I can definitly relate to this. On how much .. Well lets not go there .. lol anyways I loved it! Keep up the great work! Alexia If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! I'm your teen Host with the MOST! I enjoyed this first post of yours, full of emotion and I liked that. Well done on this one and I hope to see your work later on in the future!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
i think the poem is good but right now i think love SUCKS "I wanna be bad"-willa ford |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work I really enjoyed the read... Welcome to Passions Zu " In childhood we live under the brightness of immortality - heaven is as near and as actual as the seaside"- Graham Greene " Ministry of Fear |
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