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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Cupboards of baking soda, Peppermints – where’s the good Ol’ cookin’ at girl? Where’s the Tastey grip? Your house feels like A graveyard jamboree, my red lips A strange color stain in a life So plain Money doesn’t mind as long as It can steal your time, your water Belly dry, and now you’re a Dimple dame but your eyes are Still the same, you haven’t changed But you’re convinced, I see, you Change your dress thinking it’ll Be your afternoon tea – there in Your big house with rooms and Rooms but they’re just rooms And rooms with naked beds and Tear stain wallpaper 7.15.02 "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
'Your big house with rooms and Rooms but they’re just rooms And rooms with naked beds' strangely alluring. i love that line. you seem to be modifying your style slightly. but i can still recognize your poetry a mile away. i'm digging it more than tommy's grave. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I hate the slight hint of rhyming in this. It pisses me off. That's how it came out though. Thanks Jen. Oooh.. P.S. - I looked at your little site thingy the other day. I really like your tattoo. It's "phat".  "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very interesting I'd appreciate it if you explain things for me  all I can sense is I believe you're mad at someone so, looking forward to an explanation thanks là où est mon amour? |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well, what don't you understand? I'm not mad by the way. I feel sorry for her and I wish that I could help her instead of just wish her well like I have for the past few years. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"Money doesn’t mind as long as It can steal your time" Like those lines, a lot. *nods* Funky poem. I personally love the hint of rhyme. That's just me though. Different, still completely your style. Tight.Sincerely, SaVerite As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
but they’re just rooms And rooms with naked beds wonderful poem ::sprinkle::sprinkle:: ::::::::::::::::::: oh no! the sugar pours too fast!! ahhhh! sugar sugar sugar sugar and there is nothing you can do! i love it! beautiful beautiful beautiful! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
 omg i so luved this...i dont think i read pieces from u that i dont like, but i REALLY liked this one. its goin in my library ~In the end..it doesn't even matter...~LP |
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