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here i am an other stupid poem |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
this is they way my family is, always leaving me home alone, well, it's not very good, but i had to write so,mething. alone again Most of time it’s ok But after a while like every day You start hating it, I mean Being alone, it’s like I’m not even seen They tell me to spend more time With them, but no ones home until nine And when they get home It’s only to leave me alone I miss them, I cry I stay home and lie And they tell me they love me But how do I know that when I can’t see Please come back to me   |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
The poem, thats one thing, but ur situation is another.. If u need to talk, anyone in PIP would love to help you, if u need it, we all have open arms... I hope that everything gets better for you, my advice would be to talk to your family about how you are feeling dejected and so on I liked the poem, but it was sad  Keep in touch...  ~Jeff~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea...i feel you on this one...very true...hope everythings gets better...and  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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fairy girl Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 10*~*Virginia*~* |
this has good ideas. thanks for the read. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Aww, Kellie- this was sooo sad. Don't be sad! *Hugs* Thanks for the read. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awww this is so sad..i know what it means to be lonely....i hope things get better for you soon!!...loved the read thanx for sharing |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I know EXACTLY how you feel. My family is always gone, and my friends never call or anything... You expressed that well. I can totally relate. Everybody always tells u to do something with them sometime, but they never give you a chance. Good poem. - Cody - |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
I understand how you feel completely. I recently moved out alone! It's strange the feelings you get when no one talks to you. I hope things get better for you if not i'm always here to talk. GREAT POEM! *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here......this was very sad. I hope all gets better.....maybe you should talk to them about this? Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Being lonely isn't good especially when it is a result of your family. *big hugs* If you need to talk, Kiley, you know where to find me. Keep your head up and all that. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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The Exile Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 52Ontario, Canada |
Kellie, A sentimental self-expression of loneliness, it's a good poem and DON'T YOU EVER CALL IT STUPID cuz it's NOT! Loneliness is an inevitable part of growing-up to everyone of us, sometimes i enjoyed spending time with myself cuz i could step back a bit from everything in life and really try to be self-reflexive. I think you explored the emotions well. Keep writing- |
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