Morning Paper Tells My Future(yuck, i suck at titles)

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Teen Poetry #5

Morning Paper Tells My Future(yuck, i suck at titles)

StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-07-17 06:48 PM

I've always wanted to believe,
What my horoscope said,
Good or bad,
I wanted it to be true,
I wanted to believe it when it said:
Today will be your day to shine.
I would walk around all day thinking,
That I would soon get my chance to shine,
But what was I shining for?
Even I didn't know.
Being the hopeless romantic that I am,
I loved waking up and reading that:
Flirtation could me more serious than it appears.
But who was I flirting with?
I was dying to find the answers to life's questions,
Inside the morning paper.

"Then again, you're always first when no one's on your side."-incubus

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-07-18 01:31 AM

I like it, but it sounds like a beginning. I think it needs more development. Either one day it came true, or you realized that horoscopes were junk. Just my opinion though.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-07-22 09:34 AM

I love looking at my horoscope too.
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2002-07-23 11:55 AM

the title could be, um "printed future", with the emphasis on the word printed. Just a suggestion.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

4 posted 2002-07-23 02:03 PM

i rather like getting my fortunes from fortune cookies but hey maybe the paper is more true!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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5 posted 2002-07-29 12:24 PM

haha horoscopes
I read them too sometimes.
Cute poem.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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