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shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

0 posted 2002-07-13 06:15 PM

useless hours waiting
my friend
where are you?
              i'm alone
again

you can't even see my hope?
(just whisper)
              one word
i'll be happy

let me know you're there
and you know i'm here

one word
my friend
in the little box

so i shall
          know
so many minutes
              one.
           two..
              three...
the cursor is blinking
go ahead
type it:

.(one word).

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Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2002-07-13 11:27 PM

Liked it alot

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

2 posted 2002-07-14 12:28 PM

um well in this poem you seem to be insecure not knowing why this person isn't writing back and it worrys you but you didn't say it but it was good enough to show it

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2002-07-15 03:20 AM

hey you know i actually liked this...great job*

-dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-07-24 09:21 PM

hmmm.... I'm a little confused, but I liked it. lol.

Keep writing Abby.

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NinceInchNails

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

5 posted 2002-07-24 09:27 PM

I liked this poem. I've been through that same thing just waiting for the other person to say something..Keep up the good work!

*~erin~*

"From the start it was shaky and the characters rash, a nice setting for heartache where emotion comes last."-Yellowcard

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2002-07-24 09:36 PM

I really like this, because I can really relate. I know that waiting feeling and it is awful and you do a good job of expressing so.

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

7 posted 2002-07-25 01:09 PM

interesting piece.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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